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Sep 18, 2012, 5:26:10 AM
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In Wonderland II by ravador In Wonderland II by ravador
© Robert Tiwan 2008 - 2012

Model: Martha Bodell

All Rights Reserved. No modifying or stealing without my written permission.
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This is a beautiful photo, but I'm sure you knew that. It is very catching with the vivid colors. Often when you try to make the colors this vivid, you end up with some issues with the color boundaries, but this photo is beautifully edited.

I really like the warm feel of the photo, and the lighting is very well executed. The back lighting profile is a lovely affect, though there is maybe a touch more blown out areas than I would like, especially at the forehead. The depth of field is very nice. The background is nicely blurred while the subject is beautifully in focus.

My main criticism is with the positioning of the model in the frame. If you are familiar with some of the basic rules/recommendations of photography, one that I think could have made a positive impact on this composition is filling the frame. My recommendation would be to reposition, rather than cropping, so that the model is in the left third and the top of her head is nearer the top of the frame. The subject of the photo is the model, and she only occupies about 20% of the frame. I think that minor adjustment would make a big impact on this photo.
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kaysharoseftw Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This is such a pretty shot~! ^.^
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JeffreyDobbs Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013  Professional Photographer
Great shot!
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TamiTw Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
WOW, so so pretty. And I love the colours, it creates such a jolly mood. the red, green and yellow compliment each other so well--and I especially love how sharp the photo is. Wonderful how you put full focus on the subject model! she is so lovely haha
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shills1987 Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013  Student Digital Artist
AMAZING lighting! this is so well composed! Great capture!
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eatdrawbloom Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This is very beautiful. What an incredible shot!
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xxStarpelt Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013   Photographer
Wow, incredible portrait, the colors are so warm!
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Yanialch Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Professional Interface Designer
Excellent job! At first sight I thought it was a digital painting! Great shot!
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allyalltheway Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
shes so pretty, love the sunlight and the natural look
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Primaluna Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Student Photographer
Beautiful shot and model. This is so natural!
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BikeBoyPunk Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Beautiful image. Great use of DOF and soft warm tones :)
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